Here is chapter 2 of my new book. It's still in draft. I just reached 14,000 words yesterday and finished chapter 7!!!!!!!!!
The Driverless Carriage
After
waiting impatiently for a few minutes, Mrs. Billing saw Mrs. Waterford’s figure
coming into view from the back door. In
this time Esther had managed to get her coat on, put her handbag on her wrist,
and adjust her hat in the mirror. Her white gloves were still clutched in her
right hand. The plump cook came racing from the back door still wearing her
dirty, white apron and holding the wooden spoon. Before she could say a word,
Mrs. Billings spoke up.
“Is
the carriage ready?”
“Yes
mam, Mr. Waterford just brought it to the front.” was the old cook’s reply.
“Finally,” said Mrs. Billing quickly, not letting the old women have any time to say another word. With not another second delay Mrs. Billing reached for the door and started outside.
The
three girls quickly shadowed their mother’s long steps out the front door.
“Mam,”
said the cook following Mrs. Billing and the girls outside.
“Not
now,” replies Mrs. Billing to the women as she held her dress and walked down
the many steps. “We are late and whatever you say to me can wait.”
“But
mam…,” started the Mrs. Waterford. She was again interrupted. For right as she
began to speak Mrs. Billing had looked up at the carriage.
“Where
is Stevens?” said Mrs. Billing, startled at the image before her. When she
looked up, she saw the same rich carriage that she had ridden in numerous times
but the carriage itself was driverless.
“Mam…,”
started the cook again.
“Where
is he? Doesn’t he know we are late and are in a hurry?” The old cook finally
got tired of being interrupted and ignored. She raised her voice to her
mistress which was something she had only done but twice in the 23 years she
had work as cook for the Billings.
“Mam,”
her voice was much stronger and louder now that she had her confidence. “If you
would stop interrupting me then maybe you would hear what I have been trying to
tell you the last 10 minutes.” Mrs. Billing, seeing that the old woman was
upset and serious, took a deep breath before letting her arms fall to her side.
“All
right tell me,” said Mrs. Billing in a tone that showed that she was still in
charge yet submitting.
“Stevens
quit earlier this morning,” was the truth that came out the cook’s mouth rather
as a shock.
“What?”
Her mistress was obviously upset. “What... what… why… when? Why… why didn’t you
tell me?”
‘’I
tried to tell you mam, but you said if I spoke another word, you’d fire me.”
“But…
but why didn’t you tell me this morning when he left?”
“I
thought you knew mum,” was Mrs. Waterford’s simple reply. “Mr. Waterford told
me this morning after breakfast. He said he left early.”
“Uhhhh,”
that was all that Mrs. Billing could say in reply. Mrs. Billing did not say it
in anger but in the sadness of desperation. The old mustached driver had been
the longest driver to ever stay with the family. He had stayed a total of close
to 3 months. Esther, who with her sisters had watched the whole conversation,
quickly came up with a solution.
“I
can drive the carriage mamma!” were the words that slipped from her tongue
before she was even able to consider the idea.
“What?”
said Mrs. Billing who had been wallowing in the silence of sadness.
“I
can drive,” she said again as she took a step closer to her mother. “I’ve seen
Mr. Stevens drive a thousand times,” this was an exaggeration of course but it
was used to drive her point home, “and I’m a good rider. I know how to handle
horses and….” Mrs. Billings was now shaking her head at her daughter’s idea.
“Kitty could sit up with me. She’s an even better rider than I am.”
“No,
absolutely not,” said Mrs. Billing in a surprisingly calm voice that showed
that she half considered the idea.
“Oh
please, it will be all right,” added Kitty who stepped up to her younger
sisters’ side. There was a second of silence as Mrs. Billing tried to come up
with another solution.
“Why
can’t we just get Mr. Waterford to drive the carriage?” was Pricilla’s
reasonable voice a few feet. Now that idea Mrs. Billing would go for.
“Of
course! Why didn’t I think of that?” said Mrs. Billings with a glimmer of hope.
“Mrs. Waterford, please go get your husband and tell him to come here
immediately.” The cook started did not answer. She only obeyed by starting back
up the steps to go find her husband.
“No
wait,” shouted Esther to the cook and her mother. The cook stopped in the
middle of the steps and turned around. May I mention reader that the old cook
still appeared a bit funny here on the rich house steps? Her dirty apron still attached to her bosom,
spoon in one hand, and hair that looked positively wild. “That will take too
long. We would be so late if we wait that long. And… and if we don’t leave
now...” there was a site pause in her voice as she tried to think of something
else to say. “…the Pearson’s will beat us.” Here, reader, is where the real
changed happened. Neither of the other sentences moved her mother but the
thought of being later than the old hag Mrs. Pearson and her snobbish daughter
drove Mrs. Billing to the most acute option.
“You’re
right, there is no time to lose,” said Mrs. Billing completely convinced from
what her daughter said and not even thinking of how undignified it would look
to have your daughter drive a carriage into town. “Everyone, please get into
the carriage, at once. We do not want the Pearson’s to beat us. Es, Kitty, sit
up top and drive the horses.”
“Mamma,”
said Priscilla who was stepping into the open carriage ahead of her mother.
Mrs. Billing had one hand on her daughters’ hip, pushing her up the small
carriage step. Priscilla took another step into the carriage to obey her
mother’s pushing before sitting down. “Mamma,” she started again. “Who will
stay with the horses when we get there?”
“Oh
dear,” said her mother who was about to sit down, right next to her daughter
but stopped.
“Mr.
Waterford can,” said Kitty who was already seated up in the driver seat.
“Yes,
Mrs. Waterford,” said Mrs. Billing as she sat down. “Tell your husband to come
over the Crawford’s at once and watch the horses. He will also drive us home.”
“But
mam,” started the old cook. “Who will drive him over?” Mrs. Billings closed her
eyes and put her head in her right hand.
“If
only we didn’t have a servant problem.”
“It
is but a 5-minute drive, Mamma,” said Es as she climbed on the carriage holding
her long skirt away from the wheel. “Cannot he walk?”
“The
weather is quite nice,” added Kitty turning around.
“Yes,”
said Mrs. Billings agreeing with her daughters once more. She then turned to
address Mrs. Waterford. “Send your husband over to the Crawford right away. It
shall not take him long.”
“Yes,
mam,” said the cook.
“Now
we must be gone, or the Pearson’s will beat us,” was Mrs. Billing words as she
wove her hand forwards.” Esther slipped her white gloves on her hands and took
hold of the reins.
“Ready?”
whispered Esther to Kitty with a big grin on her face.
“Yes,”
said Kitty also grinning from ear to ear.
Though
they were smiling you could see the nervousness in their eyes showing itself.
Though Es held the reins in her hands and her mother had commanded her to go,
for half a second, she distrusted herself. Quickly though, she pushed the doubt
away. Without a second thought, she smacked the rains on the horses back and
shouted “giddy up” just like she had seen old Steven Myers do a thousand times
before. Despite her doubtful thoughts prior, her strong, vibrant voice showed
no sign of that. No one would have guessed that she felt anything less than
confident in herself. The keen horses
obeyed without a moment delay and started down the small street of
Philadelphia. For the first 4 minutes, everything went well. This was mainly
because she had not obtained much traffic. The Billing family lived in a large
plot of land just on the edge of town. When I say everything was going well, I
mean mostly. For Mrs. Billing, after realizing the absurdity of having your
daughter drive the horses, sunk down in her seat and let her hat tilt so that
it covered her face. Thankfully, Es knew the way to the Crawford home by heart
which made it unnecessary to ask directions from her concealed mother. Now
besides that, everything was well. The horses obeyed instantly when told to
turn at the corners and the few drivers that they passed did not seem to notice
or mind the female drivers. But the quiet drive did not continue as calm. For
when Es took the horses to turn onto the Crawford’s street, she forgot to look
for oncoming traffic on the crossroad. A typical rookie mistake it was, but she
had become too relaxed with the thought of driving her own vehicle that the
thought of other carriages floated away. As she turned the carriage to the
left, she did not see the oncoming carriage approaching straight for her. When
she saw the horses, halfway through the turn, she reacted in instinct. She did
not think for she did not have time, but in a split second, she made the reflex
decision to turn out of the way to the right.
“Yahh!”
she yelled as she slapped the rains on the smooth white backs of the horses.
She did it with all the muscle her thin arms would allow. The horses
immediately took three quick gallops out of the way. The other carriages horses
missed their carriage by merely a few inches. Thankfully, there was not another
carriage or motor vehicle for at least 30 yards on either street.
“Woah,”
yelled Es to the horses who at the command came to a quick and complete stop.
The truth is that Esther's reaction
was very expertly done. No experienced driver could have handled the situation
better (though an experienced driver probably would have looked for oncoming
traffic in the first place.) What I have told you reader is the truth. Though
the driver of the other carriage did not think the same of the situation.
“Woah!”
he yelled at his hoses as he pulled them sharply to a stop. “Blast!” He put his
whip down, tied the rains on the break stick, and jumped down off his seat in rage.
He wore a black top hat and an inverness cape to keep himself warm. This was
the typical outfit for every driver did in those days. He started to run to the
Billings’ carriage while looking down at his feet. There were some puddles in
the street from last night's rain, so he watched his steps.
“What
is the meaning of this?” he shouted as he jumped over one last slump of mud.
“Don’t you know how to dr...ive?” His voice faded as he looked up as saw scared
Esther looking down at him. She was obviously scared of the angry man. She just
sat there with wide eyes wondering what the man would do. After just a few
seconds of silence, Es replied to his question.
“I’m sorry sir.” That was all she could say for she was truly at a loss for words.
That's it for now. I'll try to post chapter 3 later!

OOOOOHH Please more I love it!
ReplyDelete~Keanna~
Thank you! I will hopeful post the 3rd chapter soon. :D
Delete*hopefully
DeleteYAY!
Delete~Keanna~